Innovative and highly original approach to a project in Make-Up and Hair Design informed by rigorous research. You have considered both the process of design and the presentation of the work (and how these elements create impact upon the viewer) in developing a proposal that is a very exciting proposition. Please do be mindful of the 'claims' - you are clearly enthusiastic and ambitious, we don't want to dampen that, but consider your language carefully to ensure that you are setting realistic goals, particularly when viewing online platforms, as they are now a very 'everyday' activity (it may just be that certain ideas need further clarification so we understand better the what and how) for example "being taken to the peripheries of reality" can be read in different ways. Excellent and wide ranging primary research.
First and second marker agreed grade: A2
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